| Reviews for White Stag |
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   Lee Jung chapter 18 . 7/3/2011 oh my...ohmyohmyohmy...I love this story so much! It's so sweet and heart-breaking and just so FLUFFY haha |
| Mimsical chapter 18 . 6/9/2011 dat was so fresh nd refreshing i wud drin k it on a cool glass of gr8 |
| furthestcoast chapter 5 . 6/8/2011 "I'm going to sit on my bed and play with my balls." Best ever. |
| Stop Staring At Me chapter 18 . 5/4/2011 Great story! I liked the way you handled magic in it, and I thought the magic-in-a-hat to be a funny idea. |
| boondoxgirl chapter 18 . 3/29/2011 I just finished reading White Stag and I LOVE IT! It's in the running to being one of my favorite stories on fictionpress. I love fantasy stories and there is a special place in my heart for when people have original and different magic in their stories. Oren is my favorite character with Allen a close second (he reminds me of a puppy that follows its person SO CUTE!). I love the way you wrote White Stag. It flows nicely and doesn't really have superfluous parts. The pacing I loved because the plot moved constantly but still slowed down at the right times for the character chemistry the happen between Oren and Joshua. This is your first story I've read and I can't wait to see what other stories of yours I can fall in love with. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story. |
| understand chapter 15 . 3/21/2011 o.o i was right :] ...now on to the rest of the story |
| understand chapter 14 . 3/21/2011 I realize that this story is long since done but i just want to put down my guess that the duchess is hiding her color under her over sized hat :] |
| Liz chapter 18 . 2/25/2011 One of the most adorable and well-written stories I've ever read. Nice job! |
| littleanemonefish chapter 14 . 2/17/2011 The Goodyear blimp is in the duchess's hat, if it's anywhere, haha. |
| The Moon Is My Sun chapter 18 . 1/19/2011 Aw, I'm sorry to see it end! You did an amazing job with your charters and I fell in love with them right away! Great job! |
| Wicked Neko chapter 18 . 12/30/2010 Ah... what a wonderful story. Oren is such a likeable character... I just can't help going fangirl insane. Ohh, Joshua and Allen too. *swoon* And I LOVE your writing style. It's so easy to follow and there's *just* enough details to make it interesting. :D I can't wait to read your other stories, even though they result in extreme homework procrastinating. :P |
| Chatte-Rouge chapter 18 . 12/9/2010 Oren is awesome! As is allen , Joshua isn't bad, lol Loved it |
| Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs chapter 18 . 12/2/2010 amazing! :) |
| Wingstar102 chapter 18 . 10/12/2010 I *SQUEE!*-ed, I snickered, I giggled and I'm pretty sure That I fangirled all over myself. LOL. Another fantastic piece of fiction for the world. Can't wait to read some more of them and will, of course, beg and grovel in complete adoration for more! Love and cherries, Wingstar |
| Ley chapter 18 . 9/9/2010 Just must say that I loved this. :) It makes me feel warm and fluffy. Thanks for writing such an amazing and wonderful story! |