Reviews for the color of the night
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
I like how you threw in an acrostic poem of sorts. It's nice to see you experimenting and changing things up a little. NIce job again.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I'm not sure what this particular poem meant to you, but it hit home for me. It reminded me of how many nights I couldn't sleep because I was so afraid of what would happen to me if I shut my eyes and gave up that last bit of control. I like it. And the acrostic stanza in the middle is a really nice touch. It didn't even feel forced.
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
very strong piece. I like it. Definitely an a in my book.

Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Sweet, origional, having an acrostic poem near the end of the poem. Sweet line:

'black has never bothered me too much'.

Really well written, keep writing.

Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Good. I like what you did in the second to last stanza with the word falling. Really cool.
Sophia Feros chapter 1 . 1/16/2008
Sweet! Are you going to BK tomorrow after midterms?

I like this one. It's good. haha. yeah, good.

"of molecules within the air and the stars whose light

went out scream over my peaceful state."