Reviews for Future Above
Nemonus chapter 1 . 2/23/2008
Very cool. Nice suggestions of science fiction, nice suggestions of irony ("There will be a party And wine/cake/dancing" paired with "Three hours to late" is great). The fourth stanza was a little distant from the others, like it was meant to be the chorus to a song but was never repeated. Otherwise, fine poem, nice to "sit in", as someone once said.