Reviews for gravity brings down more than just rain
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
I liked this I thought it was a bit sad though cause I know that when I was little I used to hate thinking about getting my hair cut off. Nice work though.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
This one was cute. I pictured the whole thing ].
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
I love how you take such a little thing (getting gum in your hair) and make it sound so powerful and monumental... the decriptions are beautiful and the ending line is awesome
Shadows in the Fire chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
Whoa-awesome poem, even if the subject could be taken "silly". Great style or writing.
randompoetry chapter 1 . 1/17/2008
this was a genuinely creative piece, and not only that but it was written so very well. AMAZINGLY DONE.