I love the way that you went about this piece. How you related it to the present day irrelevent crap in the world. NIce way to present it.

I like this too. "we're waiting for you" is quite ominous.

love it. love you. love the twelve step group idea, and id like to join and get this universal message through the worlds head. ;} faved.

Not my favorite of yours... its a bit more preachy than your usual religious pieces and slightly mean to hannah montana (im not a fan, but i dont think shes a horrible role model)... but it is a very funny piece

Like everything else you write, I absolutely love this. It's wonderful. Just, fyi, there are a couple typos - were (we're) it (it's), and that's (whose?) But I only noticed those the second time reading it through- otherwise, it's really clever and great. Kudos. -CD