) This is incredibly cute. I especially liked the part where you described the girl.

Forgive me if I'm wrong - I think 'juxtapose' should be 'juxtaposition' if you want it in the form of a noun. I really liked 'Laugh with blissful contradictions/as I trace paradoxes cross your skin'; I also love how the contrasts in stanza 2 sound.

great poem. if anyone doesn't understand it, it's their fault for not having a good enough vocabulary; Don't be discouraged.

I think you captured the emptions beautifully. I love the first line.

oh, these are all so lovely! i think my favorite, though, is "starry night"...amazing imagery. keep up the great work! :)

juxa-what?

This poem would be really good, if you didnt have to be an english scholar to read it! you are making your love story sound like an autopsy!