Reviews for Homeward Bound
SilverTwilight chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
That was really nice. The hopefullness and longing is portrayed very well, and the solid dates and time contrast the dreaminess of it, if that makes any sense. I think the rulers upset the flow a bit, but I know it's the only way to seperate paragraphs. Well done on this. If you have time to read it (it's kind of long), I posted a new story. Keep writing!


Clarelouise chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
wow love it! the way u record the date and time for next time the train comes is very clever and cute! also love the way the window is a barrier between worlds, and the way u captured the way u wanna run over to it but by the time u get there it will hav gone :(

u captured the photo perfectly, i could just imagine u sitting at ur window watching it even tho u didnt see it lol

Auraya chapter 1 . 1/18/2008
wow, faerie, this is so cool!

such amazing imagery, you really paint such vivid pictures with your words.

I love the N.B. at the end, such a great way to finish it off.

Love it almost as much as you x