wow that was good.

Absolutely lovely.

wonderful rhyming! it makes me jealous. and i love the format you chose, its unique and original. this is a very good piece!

Oh wow. I don't think there's anything I could add to make it better it conveys so much feeling for the amount of text it is. I do have to ask if you refer to 2 different people, I read the text over and over and while I know you refer to a guy you like at the same time I could swear you also refer to a guy that likes you. Am i horribly wrong? Anyway I like it.