Reviews for It's Just Mia |
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![]() ![]() Can't wait to see what she dose. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha! Loved this chapter! This is shaping up to be a really good story, I can't wait to see what she comes up with! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh... interesting! Loved the 'What I said' and 'What I was really thinking' lines. Mia is shaping up to be a great character, and I like your style of writing. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha cool! You should update soon...it's going somewhere I hopeP ~Lady Rai xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does everyone make their main charater short? It really irritates me. Anyways pay me no mind I really like your story so far UPDATE SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol My name is mia too! I feel special |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this story sounds really, really cool! |
![]() ![]() It sounds awesome! I can't wait to see how this will go! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *applause* Nice so far. But yes, the last sentence kind of doesn't relate to the rest of the passage. Also...2.5 kids? I hope you continue. I want to see how this goes. Alerted. - Thunderhorse. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds intersting, great finishing line! I'd like to see wher eyou go with this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is def. different and looks to be quite the interesting story. I'm curious as to where this is going to go and how things are going to turn out. Like the introduction leaves people suspcious but also gives a little background to have a glimpse on what this is about. Good job. Looking forward to the updates. Just one thing- the last sentence is confusing. Like it's a little off topic to everything mentioned above. Just a suggestion. |