Reviews for Monster
Foohypink chapter 15 . 9/7/2009
I love this story is really good I read it all in one day. I really hope you keep on writting it, I will check constanly. Great work! n_n

p.s. Ignore those who are only jelouse of talented people. Keep up the good work and update soon please!
Cailin O'Keefe chapter 15 . 7/12/2009
It must be difficult dealing with a scenario in which someone steals your work. As a writer, myself, I fully comprehend that an author's story isn't just a stream of words laced into sentences and paragraphs, but it is a living entity; an embodiment of characters, personalities, and feelings. It is very much a chamber of a writer's heart, that is the true nature of prose. To have it stolen and mimicked by another's hands -hands that don't comprehend those initial feelings and that loving impetus that drive one to write the tale, in the first place -must be crushing, infuriating, discouraging. It leaves one wondering, 'Why bother? All my efforts have been squandered.' Each story ever told SHOULD be unique, characterized by the maker's unique thoughts and personality. I just wish, more people would comprehend this. I've seen the death of many good tales; stories that I carry in my head and heart...

They weren't just stories, for me. They were the voices of peoples that I thoroughly enjoyed coming to know and explore. They were quiet dreams I didn't realize I was without. Your story, very much, is among those. A beautiful melody of words that are like toxic fumes in my head. I almost want to selfishly ask if you could send, just myself, the story, so I can finish enjoying the stunning realms you've opened up to me. [I've issues...] A story unfinished is like a life cut short, it's taboo and shouldn't ever have to be. But I understand the reasoning for cessation. It's just so sad...

Such lovely characters, and my heart is completely taken by Alistair and Alexandre, most specifically. Never mind that Hunter could be a friend closer than a sister, how easily her voice fits in my mind. Perhaps I just get too attached to the world of fantasy...

Anyway...thank you for the brilliant read. This will definitely be among the favorites I've come upon, and will discover, in my lifetime.
Cafune chapter 15 . 7/9/2009
Do you ever plan on continuing this? I'm sorry, but I don't really know how I can help your writing, though I loved this. It does show certain similarities to Twilight, but not completely. I loved it, I will favorite it, and I really hope that sometime you will update it with another chapter.
Alexandra Paige chapter 15 . 5/6/2009
This story is really fantastic. Your writing skills surpass any authors and your story idea is so enthralling. I'm saddened to see that someone would take your idea and say it was theirs.

I see that you haven't updated in about 6 months and I really hope that in the near future you continue it! Great job!

Hope to read more,

rosieroo chapter 15 . 4/25/2009
this story is awesome! i really like it! plleaase update! i cant wait!

i love how its not about vampires, but you've created something totally new!
KMx0x chapter 3 . 4/19/2009
This story is amazingg.


Update soon!
julialakewood chapter 15 . 2/16/2009
update, soon please :D
childishjade chapter 15 . 2/9/2009
I really like this story, I really liked the way you made the Stone brothers really mysterious, and how we only found out what Alexandre was in the last couple of chapters.

And, I think it's sweet when he's calling Hunter 'love' and 'starlight' though she doesn't seem to have picked up on it yet :)

I adore your writing style to, can't wait to read more
Poyo chapter 1 . 2/4/2009
Every time I opened this chapter, something came up and I never got a chance to finish it. I finally got around to it, and I'm glad I did.

Lee seemed rather nice! I wonder if he'll be appearing in the story again, or if he's our main guy?

Hard to say, but great chapter.
Loki the Jackal chapter 4 . 1/11/2009
The second I read that last line I actually said What? F*! Noo!

Over all... I find this one of the rare finds here on FP.

I really can't find anything horrible or bad about this.

But that speaks for itself, i never really notice anything unless... it's blaringly bad.

I'm loving this and I'll keep reading!
charm en route chapter 12 . 1/3/2009
I must say that I have definitely enjoyed your story so far. Especially the part about Neverland and the caterpillar bit. :D

Although, I can't help but wonder why Hunter hasn't asked anyone who Victor is, because he seems pretty important (well, obviously).

Anyway, this is an intriguing story, and I'll be waiting for an update.
grassong chapter 7 . 1/2/2009
did the cat go through a sex change? .. cuz im pretty sure in the previous? chapter, it was a girl...
Ayla Gray chapter 15 . 12/31/2008
oh god, this story is brilliant! i love it so much alexandre is so humorious sometimes. haha
theblindninja316 chapter 15 . 12/26/2008
I do like the story. It's extremely interesting, though you seem to accidentally hit the letter t instead of r sometimes. It kind of reminded me a little of Twilight, but as I kept reading I realized that the plot was definitely original. Over all, good story. I hope you update soon and merry late Christmas. Or if you're atheist, have a good vacation.
swellhats chapter 5 . 12/25/2008
So far it seems very similar to Twilight, which I am not fond of in the least, but I enjoy your writing style so I will continue reading :)
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