So hello again, I just read that you were going to put a sequel, and I'm disappointed to see that it has been 3 years and there's no where to be seen and my obsession for this story isn't healthy, please I beg you to write it!
Regards,
Diane.

I hate writing reviews to stories, you know, I just get too shocked and have 1000 things to write and puff! They freaking dissapear in my mouth and my heart starts beating frustrated. This story was fucking awesome, I'm telling you, I have no bloody idea why you don't have more reviews, it got under my skin. I was on the edge every single chapter, even reading at school durings breaks or classes, since yesterday's morning. Jesse was so perfect, so wonderful, so immortal. And Elizaberh, she was vulnerable and her paranoia always had me biting my nails. I just got a little confusing at the end, How did they escape?! Hopefully you answer my question one day.
Regards,
Diane.

I seriously do not like Jenna, but good books so far.

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The main character's personality is annoying. She acts like stuck up female dog most of the time and if she's so truly annoyed by good natured Jenna, she should do herself and Jenna a favor by being totally friendless. I felt really bad for Jenna throughout the story because her "friend" was acting like a spoiled, overtly jealous brat.
Other than the issue with the protagonists personality, the story wasn't too bad. It had some grammatical errors but if it wasn't for my disdain toward the main character, I prob would've read it until the end but I simply cannot put up with it Elizabeth anymore.
But it ha potential :)

Your writing is brilliant and all...but it's eerily comparable to 'The Twilight Saga'. Maybe you should rewrite the story to make it less coomparable to it.

Otherwise, the story is enticing, and I can hardly stop reading.

No offence or anything. Forgive for posting a negative comment. Would love to hear from you.

Omg! This is the cutest thing ever! When i first started this story I wasn't at all comvinced, where you are going with it. But the more I read, the lovelier the story got, until you had been hooked and I am soooo in love with it! I can't wait to read on, so I'll shut up now and do soooo :D

Hey,

I just started reading this fic and it looks very promising and interesting. Looking forward to what's gonna come up.

I find that Jenna is a very annoying character. Haha

Cheers,
TQL

The flipping prologue is perfect.
Your writing is perfect.
My god, must read more O.O

I was rereading this story and realized I never reviewed, so here it is.

I truly love this story: characters, plot, and all. But I do have to admit that there are a few things that could have made it better. I was kind of confused up until the part where Jesse explains what he is at the Youth camp. There were some typos, and I honestly felt like you could flesh this story out more. I get that Elizabeth is...overwhelmed, but at times, I feel really clueless as to why. Like in the beginning, I felt like I had absolutely no reason for why she hated him. There are a few other spots I could comment on, but I don't want to seem like I'm trashing this story. I'm not, I love it, and it's NOT like Twilight (thank god) and I refuse to see how other people could compare them. If you do happen to want to hear some other comments/ suggestions etc, you could always email me.

I was rereading this story and realized I never reviewed, so here it is.

I truly love this story: characters, plot, and all. But I do have to admit that there are a few things that could have made it better. I was kind of confused up until the part where Jesse explains what he is at the Youth camp. There were some typos, and I honestly felt like you could flesh this story out more. I get that Elizabeth is...overwhelmed, but at times, I feel really clueless as to why. Like in the beginning, I felt like I had absolutely no reason for why she hated him. There are a few other spots I could comment on, but I don't want to seem like I'm trashing this story. I'm not, I love it, and it's NOT like Twilight (thank god) and I refuse to see how other people could compare them. If you do happen to want to hear some other comments/ suggestions etc, you could always email me. tharakaw verizon

This story is a good read and I love the romance between Jesse and Elizabeth. :D

This story was absolutely brilliant and well written. There's quite a bit of loosens in there, but I get that those are things that can always be perfected with growth. But if you were to fix, this would be an amazing booked to be published.

Maybe tie in her mothers suspicious death to the omnipotents?

Oh, and I was reading through the reviews, cause I like to see how peoples mind differ in what they desperately take from stories and noticed all the people that stopped reading, bashed or drew tons of parallels to Twilight. And honestly it kind of annoyed me. Having read the parallels myself i can see the parallels, but I don't believe it's anything other than subconscious coincidence. You made the plot your own, as well as the characters. And you did a brilliant job at it. And I think its irrational to draw parallels to a story that isn't entirely in its own as well. The boy meets girl, mysteriousness has been done a million times over. But it's how you do it that separates you from everyone else.

Great job!

What an unusual story. Well written and simply amazing.

ok, I quite liked the beginning but as this story progresses it just becomes more and more obvious that you're copying twilight. I actually like Stephenie Meyer but if I'd wanted to read twilight I would have.