|Reviews for One Sunny Day|
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
I like the tone of this, as it remains consistent and light. The conclusion, and the end line wrap this up well, as it completes the modernity of the work with a timeless concept. Well written. MD:77.
| TheDJ chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
As always, a brilliant poem. I loved the way you drew together your feelings in the poem. The structure of the poem was very good (although not rhyming yet ;) - jokes).
Brilliant poem mate, can't wait to talk again.
(And, on the last review, not all men are that bad :p... well... most of us are ;))
| paleimitators chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
Aww... :D I'm really loving this poem. It reminds me of what my ex used to say to me. Men are stupid...
Write more poems! You have a lot of angst in those IM conversations to write a ton of poems. That guy's an idiot.
BTW, thanks for the reviews!
peace and crackers! :P