|Reviews for Chronicles of my Descent|
| fairytale failure chapter 6 . 1/19/2008
Memories - I really like the image at the beginning, which introduces the mood that I feel in the first part of the poem - confusion, and things spinning out of control.
Concept - I think this is my favourite. I really like the...well, the concept. Your observations about time ring true; I really liked 'Everything's the same but its all changed, we're the same but everything's changed.', though I think it would be nice to use it to completely turn around what you said - i.e. 'Everything's the same but we've all changed, we're the same but everything's changed.' Also enjoyed 'Where does time go when it dies?'
Obtrusive - The first two lines are great, and I like the use of German.
| ZombieMcQueen chapter 6 . 1/19/2008
wow...this is definitely among my favorite of your works, this entire anthology. please, PLEASE keep writing for this collection. maybe get it published as a book sometime, so I can take it with me places, haha.
the line "where does time go when it dies" really moved me.
| Rose Valentine chapter 6 . 1/19/2008
It's so poetic, the way you express your poetry! It's full of mellow imagery and fragile thoughts. I loved it! :)