|Reviews for hysterical haze, a brink|
| Thenardier chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
I like the way you italicized a few choice words, and everything else falls into place. Lovely.
| yanz chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
i love the poems in which a feeling can be conveyed through so little words, and i really like the italicizing to make a point. great job!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I love the title and the italicized parts... short and beautiful piece
| Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Sweet, well written, too bad it's short, i'd love to read more.
Even in 3 lines its well written, keep at it D
| burning in effigy chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
short and simple but makes a point
(i love short poems that are able to convey an emotion/thought in so few words)
great job :]
| a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/19/2008
Not really a haiku, but that's okay. Nice sense of urgency and desperation. I like it.