Reviews for Vampire? Please
ChristianAngel01 chapter 11 . 11/16/2009
whoa this was interesting just what is vienna exactly and what is going to happen with her and marcel ' relationship what if he drank her blood and it had a reverse affect on him like giving him strength and power from out of love that would be awesome then he would take all of them down!
l'heautontimoroumenos chapter 11 . 7/5/2008
Great story so far. I like Mariabelle.

Anyway, it looked like you wanted to make them speak a little spanish and french. If you need anything in french, I can help.

Do post your next chapter soon, because I'd be happy to see what happens next
Naomi Chick chapter 11 . 6/26/2008
That must of been awkward for Vienna and Marcel. Good point. What is the mystery around Vienna. Awesome chapter. Can't wait until the next update.
East-0f-Eden chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
very interesting I can't wait for update! :)
DBro chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
yay a new chapter! great detail in this one, as always. i like how you expanded on mariabelle and marcel's relationship.

just one thing to critique: marcel's eyes... first you describe them as ebony in color, then later say they're bloody orbs (meaning they're red). which one is it?

can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder who or what has shut vienna's mind off? happy writing!
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
Great chapter. It's a bit like Edward not being able to read Bella's mind, isn't it? But that's OK. I like this anyway. Update soon!
gallowsCalibrator chapter 11 . 6/24/2008
Awesome chapter. I can't wait for you to update!

Neat chapter 10 . 6/18/2008
I've been a fan of this lovely story for a while now and I just thought I'd drop by and say that you're doing a fabulous job :) Keep up the good work, chica!

Oh, and by the way, I love the title of your story. It makes me giggle. Vampire?

MamiPapi chapter 10 . 6/11/2008
Liked your story so far! Wonder what Marcel's gonna do about it soon. Will they get together in the end? I'm a sucker for such lovey dovey stories! Update soon please
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 10 . 4/1/2008
Cool, update soon.
sapphirehearts chapter 10 . 3/28/2008
You can't just leave it there! This chapter was so good! Please update soon!

I Quoth Nevermore chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
Loved the fishing scene and the spandex. Haha. I have to wear spandex for track because the uniform shorts are like booty shorts and we don't want to run by a bunch of people and flash them. LoL. Well, update soon!
LastTrueKnight chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
26 minutes... lol. Still loving it. Oh, the suspense... Can't wait for more!
xbrunnettex0 chapter 10 . 3/26/2008
o no. shes going to be like afraid of him now. lovellyy.
East-0f-Eden chapter 9 . 3/17/2008
great keep it up!
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