Reviews for Vampire? Please |
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![]() ![]() ![]() whoa this was interesting just what is vienna exactly and what is going to happen with her and marcel ' relationship what if he drank her blood and it had a reverse affect on him like giving him strength and power from out of love that would be awesome then he would take all of them down! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. I like Mariabelle. Anyway, it looked like you wanted to make them speak a little spanish and french. If you need anything in french, I can help. Do post your next chapter soon, because I'd be happy to see what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() That must of been awkward for Vienna and Marcel. Good point. What is the mystery around Vienna. Awesome chapter. Can't wait until the next update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very interesting I can't wait for update! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay a new chapter! great detail in this one, as always. i like how you expanded on mariabelle and marcel's relationship. just one thing to critique: marcel's eyes... first you describe them as ebony in color, then later say they're bloody orbs (meaning they're red). which one is it? can't wait for the next chapter. i wonder who or what has shut vienna's mind off? happy writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. It's a bit like Edward not being able to read Bella's mind, isn't it? But that's OK. I like this anyway. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter. I can't wait for you to update! -Raven |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been a fan of this lovely story for a while now and I just thought I'd drop by and say that you're doing a fabulous job :) Keep up the good work, chica! Oh, and by the way, I love the title of your story. It makes me giggle. Vampire? Puh-lease. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Liked your story so far! Wonder what Marcel's gonna do about it soon. Will they get together in the end? I'm a sucker for such lovey dovey stories! Update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool, update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't just leave it there! This chapter was so good! Please update soon! -Meg |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved the fishing scene and the spandex. Haha. I have to wear spandex for track because the uniform shorts are like booty shorts and we don't want to run by a bunch of people and flash them. LoL. Well, update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 26 minutes... lol. Still loving it. Oh, the suspense... Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o no. shes going to be like afraid of him now. lovellyy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great keep it up! |