Great chapter. I'm so glad Marcel and his sister rescue Vienna

WOOT! I really like your story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Don't I sound like a fan-girl?

-Kira Love

Wh-whoa. That was... hmm... interesting... and somewhat scary. Lol. Keep up the good work!

ammaazzinngg chapter.. loved it.

Awesome chapter, so she's poison, and if Marcel ever bit her he would be dead. Right?

Great chapter. Oh my gosh. She doesn't know Marcel is a vampire? Ooh man. I hope you update soon!

your story is simply brilliant. you write with great confidence and truth that not a lot of people can write with. keep on writing more, you're really amazing!

Wow. I love Marcel. They're so cute together. Good chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

-Meg

Excellent, story. I have seen some good vampire novels but this is one of the best. Nice female protagonist, great antagonists. The one thing I do indeed admire is how you build suspense. It's a feature that even the best usually have to struggle to do... Hm... I just ranked you with the best didn't I... Oh well, it's true this story is indeed excellent and I can't wait for you to write more.

Awesome story, I hope you update soon!

This chapter... I must say it freaked me out just the tiniest bit. Which is good. I mean, stories should be able to have that grip on you. But dang... I'm about to go to bed, and I think I'm going to have vampire nightmares. Most of my vampire dreams are good, so this will be a first.

Good job. Update soon.

great story keep it up! :)

She seems to be a very unlucky girl...haha. Please update soon!

-Meg

Another cliff hanger! ANOTHER! Argh! This story is getting so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Woah. Wicked intense chapter. That last scene, does that mean she's turning into a vampire? Maybe...anyways, great chapter. I'm assuming you don't want me to be your beta anymore, but that's fine. No hard feelings. I still think this is brilliant. Update soon!