Reviews for Vampire? Please
Naomi Chick chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
Great chapter. I'm so glad Marcel and his sister rescue Vienna
KiraLove chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
WOOT! I really like your story. I can't wait to see what happens next! Don't I sound like a fan-girl?

-Kira Love
NightmareWriter chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
Wh-whoa. That was... hmm... interesting... and somewhat scary. Lol. Keep up the good work!
xbrunnettex0 chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
ammaazzinngg chapter.. loved it.
Mayu-San-Sakura chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
Awesome chapter, so she's poison, and if Marcel ever bit her he would be dead. Right?
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
Great chapter. Oh my gosh. She doesn't know Marcel is a vampire? Ooh man. I hope you update soon!
dejavu1300 chapter 1 . 3/6/2008
your story is simply brilliant. you write with great confidence and truth that not a lot of people can write with. keep on writing more, you're really amazing!
sapphirehearts chapter 9 . 3/6/2008
Wow. I love Marcel. They're so cute together. Good chapter. Looking forward to the next one.

Burning Frost chapter 8 . 2/28/2008
Excellent, story. I have seen some good vampire novels but this is one of the best. Nice female protagonist, great antagonists. The one thing I do indeed admire is how you build suspense. It's a feature that even the best usually have to struggle to do... Hm... I just ranked you with the best didn't I... Oh well, it's true this story is indeed excellent and I can't wait for you to write more.
ChokutoSaLance chapter 8 . 2/28/2008
Awesome story, I hope you update soon!
Kohnitz chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
This chapter... I must say it freaked me out just the tiniest bit. Which is good. I mean, stories should be able to have that grip on you. But dang... I'm about to go to bed, and I think I'm going to have vampire nightmares. Most of my vampire dreams are good, so this will be a first.

Good job. Update soon.
East-0f-Eden chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
great story keep it up! :)
sapphirehearts chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
She seems to be a very unlucky girl...haha. Please update soon!

NightmareWriter chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
Another cliff hanger! ANOTHER! Argh! This story is getting so good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I Quoth Nevermore chapter 8 . 2/27/2008
Woah. Wicked intense chapter. That last scene, does that mean she's turning into a vampire? Maybe...anyways, great chapter. I'm assuming you don't want me to be your beta anymore, but that's fine. No hard feelings. I still think this is brilliant. Update soon!
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