Yay ! I really love where this is heading - so much suspense and romance, it just makes my blood boil with anticipation ! Update !

~Jo

Hey! That was another REALLY good chapter! So I can't decide if Marcel is a vampire or what he is exactly. lol. I can't wait to read more. Please update as soon as possible! Very good story so far. keep it up!

I liked this chapter. At the end, you said 'an unfamiliar voice whispered,' so does that mean it's not Michael? Or maybe she's just not used to his voice so it is unfamiliar. Huh...anyways, just send the chapter right on over and I'll edit it any time. I'm actually about to edit chapter two right now. So watch out for that.

Awesome! I totally loved it. Update soon!

You spelt half and stubborn wrong, other then that, and a few other mistakes it was pretty good, update soon.

Great chapter. What will happen to Vienna? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Very good story! I like your characters. They are very well described. O can't wait to see what happens with the elders and what not, and what Marcel is going to tell Vienna about. I'm so excited! I hope you update REALLY soon!

Cool chapter, can't wait for the next!

Interesting chapter. Make sure you tell the different between one character talking from another character. Other than that great job.

Great chapter. Ep! You forgot to tell people you changed his name from Marcus to Michael! Oh well, you can just tell people when they ask about it in a review.

And I love Michael's character. No, I don't like him like that. I just think you depict his as a great evil sort of guy. And the description of him about her bite her and all was great, too.

I'm really curious about what's going on with Mariabelle and her mum. Interesting stuff right there. I like how Mariabelle can read minds. Pretty cool.

Oh, and the ending, with Michael disappearing and all, was great. Write more soon!

Write more, please? I'm addicted.

I'd write a lot more... but I don't really know what to say. I'm sort of very much stunned by this story. I might be in love with it.

Aw... I think I may be in love with Marcel. Or I would be, if I wasn't already in love with my Jack. But you get the point.

Much love and ink.

Gahh. I was so tense during this. haha. But I must say, I love it. And the vampires... THERE'S SO MANY! (smiles)

Much love and ink.

Oh my gee. Can I say I love this story? I'll be keeping tabs. PLEASE, if nothing else: update. I love vampires.

Good job.

Much love and ink.

Okay, so she woke up naked. That's a thriller for her. Why did Marcel say that no else lived there, but his mom said that her daughter lived there also...? (that is not a direct question, so I don't want you tell me in a pm, but in the story.)