Reviews for Memories
S'wit chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
I liked it, it was short but moving (nearly to tears, not good when your in a public computer area)
musicalemz74 chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
O so easy to relate to. Great poem, it really summarizes your point in a way thats not hard to comprehend. One small note, on the seventh line you forgot one of the m's in remember. Another poem I can relate to! Good job!
lael1bologna chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
I love the ending "i won't remember" it's so true. Memories are just really happy, and sad. It's painfu. You've managed to get this down in a poem is less than 100 words. Bravo!
Kaitlyn Bathory chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Very good poem, I liked the lack of rhyme scheme, too many people think poems HAVE to rhyme. Not all poems rhyme, most of mine do, but only 'cause it sounds good. Anyway, nice poem!