Reviews for Sheol
inspiredvisionary chapter 3 . 8/21/2011
loving how i can read it and visualize a pretty good martial-arts movie in my head. your fight scenes are that well-written. why you have ao little reviews so far confuses me.
InspiredVisionary chapter 2 . 8/21/2011
i love muay thai. it is such a beautiful and deadly fighting style.
Ds14 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
I love this. It's a revenge plot but you really made it your own. Characters are unique and complex already and the story moves at a comfortable pace. Great job, story is superduperdope.
Melissa Norvell chapter 30 . 6/14/2009
I like the happy overtones of this one shot and I think it wrapped up Sheol quite nicely. I definitely look forward to any future works that you have planned and I'll be sure to give you reviews as well. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Melissa Norvell chapter 29 . 6/14/2009
I really like your concept of Sarah's character here. You did a fabulous job with this one shot and I definitely enjoyed it.
Melissa Norvell chapter 28 . 6/14/2009
Another wonderful one shot full of characterization here. I really like the outlook of Fredrich as well. I have two more to review and then I shall call it a day. I've been online for 5 hours already.
Melissa Norvell chapter 27 . 6/14/2009
I'm getting around to reviewing these and happy to do so. I really liked what you were trying to portray with the hatred subject. I'm going to review you on the next three as well.
Melissa Norvell chapter 26 . 6/6/2009
This is a very good one-shot and I'm sorry that I didn't review it the other day when I read it. I really like the depth and introspective that you put on Sarah and they way that she views Claude. I'm going to read your next one, so expect another review from me soon.
Venus Gate chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
Very clean, and a joy to read :)

The fighting sequences are a little drawn out. I know you like to see it in your head, but I don't want to spend 15 minutes trying to see the same thing in my head.

The (Australian?) Caucasian's dialogue is a little wonky, though I'm not really an expert.

The paragraph starting with "His usual sparring partner..." is kind of redundant for the first part, as you already know some of these things from her own perspective.

And then while Mothra made me smile, it seemed odd to me that you felt the need to explain Mothra, but not any of the other Asian terminology.

Happy writing~
Melissa Norvell chapter 24 . 5/20/2009
I see that you've added character profiles. They are very nice and provide a lot of wonderful information about your characters. Good job!
Melissa Norvell chapter 23 . 5/10/2009
I really liked the ending to this one and I'm glad that you wrote something on characters that didn't get much spotlight. You provided an in depth detailed chapter about them that made me understand them more then I did in Sheol. I like how you gave them that depth.
Melissa Norvell chapter 22 . 5/10/2009
Very nice little one shot that adds onto the Sheol series in an interesting way. I actually like this pairing, thanks to this little one shot. You've got a great sense of description. I wished I could write like that.
Fallenwolfangel chapter 1 . 12/25/2008
awesome story congrats on finishing the story
Melissa Norvell chapter 20 . 3/9/2008
Wow,it's finally ended. It was a very good ending to a story like this though. I'm very happy that everything was concluded.
Eternal Crusher chapter 20 . 3/2/2008
Hey, I've been reading your story for a while, but this is the first time that I've reviewed. Anyways, it's a really nice touch for the ending for the story. It would be great if you posted another story here, because you are a good writer. Anyways that's all for now.

Eternal Crusher
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