|Reviews for Taciturn|
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 5/20/2009
A beautiful poem. I like the idea of speaking without words. My favorite line is the first one: "My words break as a butterfly perches on my hand."
| flea writer chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
i really like this! great imagery, beautiful scene you created :)
| SEMMU chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Beautiful imagery. Write on! The formating was a little different. Breaks seemed to be random. Are you emulating someone I'm not aware of, or does each break represent a new thought? Free verse is very loose; so there's nothing wrong with your breaks. Yet, I'm curious to know your motivation?