Reviews for It wasn't love
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
'Tis sad but good. I really liked the lines "how long will it take me to detoxify of you?/I don't want to die for love overdose.." There is a longing for her as well as a longing for freedom. Compairing the love for a woman to a drug. Reminds me of the song Nymphetamine by Cradle Of Filth. I dont like Cradle of Filth cause they're kinda creepy but I do like that song it has some things in common with your poem. Anywhoo Well written I enjoyed reading it. Keep writting
crumpled.STIXERZ.paper chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
"I don't want to stay here but I have no place to go." - That line was one of the most powerful I've read in a long time.

The entire poem seemed to be kind of like a fairy tale gone wrong. The last line was a complete surprise to me because I expected it to be something less, not more. The broken rhythm and (what sounded like) random flashbacks really made this one work.

smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
that was beautiful but so sad. i have much empathy for you, though. i think this is too much of a common story in our society...i hope things get better.