|Reviews for it doesn't matter why|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
This was beautiful, and I believe I know who it is about. I think they' be happy to see their story so well put. But most of all I think it would touch them to know that you cared.
| siphoned afterglow chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
a beautiful sadness erupts after reading this.
You have written this very well handling this topic very Delicately.
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
very good poem. I think it's very emotional, very true, and very real. Keep it up.
| half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
I read this poem twice, and it got better the second time. :)
"i’m sure that angels sound prettier than her equipment"
but just the words, “i love you.”
is enough to keep me going.
I loved this line; it was so... I don't know - just - inspiring, really. Beautiful.
This was my favorite line by far: "and roses are blooming without thorns." - It was poetic and painful and wistful and stunning. :)
Heartbreaking poem but beautiful nonetheless (or maybe because).
Gute nacht, tomodachi
| Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Good work. I liked it.