|Reviews for Notre Revanche|
| Goddess of Trix chapter 3 . 1/24/2008
Did Ariel deserve it? Perhaps. Pierre did warn her.
Is Pierre just cruel? Well, he does have a good reason for doing it, but even doing bad things with good intentions doesn't justify what he is doing.
Over all this is really well-written. Especially for a thirteen year old. .
| Burning Frost chapter 3 . 1/24/2008
Is Pierre cruel? Not really, after all he did warn her... Did Ariel deserve it? Can't really say, there are a lot worse people out there after all...
And moving on to the brunt of the review, aside from a few spelling errors, it's a pretty good fic, and you did seem to capture Ariel's attitude perfectly. I'm impressed. Keep writing.
| Rose Valentine chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
You should make this a short story with chapters in them to amplify the suspense that you want us to see. I think Pierre's the one who is evil. I mean, capturing girls in books? What's the reason behind that? But overall, it's not bad.