Reviews for Incomplete Angel
Carlette chapter 2 . 9/12/2008
Damn James and his obliviousness! *slaps him*

And Aiden needs to get over himself and just tell him! I like Alyssa, she's cool _
Carlette chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This is much better! _

There's a lot more description and the length of the chapter is good. I like the way you described the dream.

I love that Alyssa knows Aiden's feelings toward James. And it's even better that she's fine with it _

I still wouldn't be able to add this one to my C2 because it's Fantasy, not young adult :/

But I'll keep reading!
TinTinV chapter 4 . 5/28/2008
DATZ SEW GUD N EMOCHUNULL I JUSS KRAI'D A LIL ON DA INSAID. SHAME ON ME WHY AM I SO STUPID?
Oakland chapter 4 . 1/26/2008
more please