|Reviews for Incomplete Angel|
| Carlette chapter 2 . 9/12/2008
Damn James and his obliviousness! *slaps him*
And Aiden needs to get over himself and just tell him! I like Alyssa, she's cool _
| Carlette chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
This is much better! _
There's a lot more description and the length of the chapter is good. I like the way you described the dream.
I love that Alyssa knows Aiden's feelings toward James. And it's even better that she's fine with it _
I still wouldn't be able to add this one to my C2 because it's Fantasy, not young adult :/
But I'll keep reading!
| TinTinV chapter 4 . 5/28/2008
DATZ SEW GUD N EMOCHUNULL I JUSS KRAI'D A LIL ON DA INSAID. SHAME ON ME WHY AM I SO STUPID?
| Oakland chapter 4 . 1/26/2008