Reviews for colors on the driveway
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/19/2008
ha! I love it. Although I must say it is sad, I know how awful he could be and can be so for that I just laugh. NIc job though hun! xox
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Aw, that was really sad. I like it though, it's a really original moment, but very memorable.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I love the ending.. its absolutely beautiful
Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Wow, it's written well, but it's so sad. I like it, again I think it's really real. Some poems don't really feel real, you can't really feel the emotion. In this one, you definitely can.

Stay strong.

Faith
burning in effigy chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
like how this is a story within a poem... or a poem within a story (which ever you prefer)

honest but sad ending... really like the subtle details you blend in with the actions to prove your point :]
Militant Poet chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Again, wonderful work! I really love your writing )