Reviews for she was dying to be loved
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
aw, this was so sad. the scary part is that i've known girls like this, or rather girls that did this kinda thing cause they thought they were fat. feeling in this was that of a young girl, one that is relatable. very nice work.
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Rawr. Body image. Blech. I wish people just thought the inside of people was beautiful.
hazyglow chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
That was very .. profound

.. and intense.

I liked it

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
powerful piece... I love the ending with the ice... its a wonderful image... awesome job
the face in the window chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
This is amazing and so is all your writing. I wish I had more time to review all your pieces - they're all fantastic.


burning in effigy chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
i actually learned something from chemistry last year... (i'm quite amazed actually); i get the first stanza.. and i shouldn't be this excited

like how you branch from just one thought into so many others.. finding many deeper meanings to the simple feeling of just feeling "fat"; formatting was fitting, and i like the brokenness (but still solid) of the poem
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
I liked it. Do you ever slow down when you write? I mean I have you for my alert and each day you have something new. Lol. Good work.