Reviews for Twelve Minutes to Day
x account closed x chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
numbersnumbersnumbers.

idig'em.

have you heard thursday's jet black new year? worth a listen.

this whole thing reminds me of the nexttolast verse.

regardless, i think that this, this is radawesome priceless.
lackluster chapter 1 . 3/14/2008
i love how you play with numbers. it's a subdues sort of poem...almost like the heat of the previous emotion (anger, hurt...?) has passed and you're just left with your thoughts. not quite numb, but getting there. makes me think.

i love it.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/21/2008
Feelinngs and actions will be created... feelings

I love the numbers... awesome idea nad it flows really well