Reviews for My Little Doll
heal me forever chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
its amazing lovely i love it :) chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
This brought a smile to my face. Don't we all need a guy like that...
pandarocket chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
This story really excited me for several reasons:

First of all, I fucking love Jay Jays! I hate Supre, but that's not the point. I'm so sick of reading stories with 'Hot Topic', 'Forever 21', 'Hollister', etc. It makes me pathetically excited to read a story where I actually know what shops you're talking about! :D

Secondly, I love Panic! at the Disco! Even though it was mentioned very briefly, it made me excited.

And thirdly? It was just really, really cute :D

Good job.
eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
hi !

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Artume chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
That was a very cute little one-shot. ] I loved the whole Spanish thing. Lovely!
Hidden Flowers chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
You speak Spanish? First or second language? It was my first. And Ricky Martin is very gorgeous. I like him best in the clip to the song 'Juramento' because the song is even better than his face. Especially in Spanish. Incredible that anyone that pretty can be so talented and bilingual to boot. I have a voice and several languages, but not talent.

Hypa To Hell And Back chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
aw, major cute! i love it!
Anne chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Hi! I think this story is cute however, transitioning from past to present - it was hard to understand. I couldn't tell until he said something about seeing her for 6 months and then I started to understand.
slee5133 chapter 1 . 4/1/2009
my god spanish guys are hot. totally do not blame her!
effervescent-sentiments chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
That was too cute. :) I'd either get a beta or brush up on your grammar - you have quite a few distracting errors. Other than that, good work! A sweet, noncommittal pick me up. Just what I needed.

Green Eyed Angel chapter 1 . 8/3/2008
Awesome story! A bit cliche (except for the car and grandma thing) but very very good. Straight to my faves list.
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 6/15/2008
nice cute little fluff...even though i knew what the word meant from the beginning because of spanish class...i like it a lot!
deliriousity chapter 1 . 4/5/2008
aw, i love cliche cute!
Erin Ephebiphobia chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
Woahh. Blew. My. Mi-i-i-ind!
Kestrel's Queen chapter 1 . 3/23/2008
I took a picture with Ricky Martin once... Too bad he was a monkey... (We were staying at a resort in Mexico for my cousin's wedding.)

Anyway, this was incredibly cute, and I liked it quite a lot. I just hope you'll update Dawn again soon.
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