7 year break huh

I love this story. You write very well and the chacraters are well writen. I'm really hoping you'll finish this one day. :)

Absolutely LOVE IT! More please!

I hope you update soon. Now that the character Daniel is brought in it should be interesting...

LOVED THE STORY! I find River pretty cute... and can't wait for the next one! I don't know why but, it would be cool if Aubrey suffers a lot ... (physically and emotianally), and make River feel all guilty and worried... anyway... UPDATE SOON! :D

This is very good and well written in a way that it makes it fun to read thank you for posting and when you have time update.

I love this chapter even though Aubrey did get hurt. And River was really nice, sweet, and caring this chapter that the way you managed to write it and how the flow went didn't freak me out like how other stories would.

Great job, and keep it up!

Until then, I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter because I know how you feel about trying to write this story while going on with a busy, booked-up life schedule.

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She does indie rock music? that's so cool! I love those type of music! :]

Now this is more like it. Loved the double meaning of the title, referring to both her bandmates and the ring. Nice touch.

...this chapter didn't has a lot of shaggy dogs.

So River is tired of the spotlight and he goes and does the exact thing that puts him in back on it? Unless you are reserving an actual effective explanation for the future, this doesn't make sense.

Aubrey is supposed to be pissed because he almost forced her to marry him but then the question about that just comes at the end of their conversation as an afterthought? No sense either.

And why couldn't they just tell Mark the truth? That she was getting a spider out of his shirt?

Also the fact that she went to dance with another guy and then let him go without doing anything immediately? Seemed a too obvious plot device to move the story along.

And the fact that he even went with the other woman instead of just looking for her? If you are going in the way that he was secretly in love with her always, this doesn't make sense either.

I dunno, I really like this story until this point, but there are too many shaggy dogs in just one chapter.

I absolutely love this story and I really hope that you come back and finish this. I think that River is going to fall in love first, besides she has already and she will fall right along. But I think that Daniel is going to be a problem and probably one of River's conquests but I think they will make it through it!

Urmm.. Are you planning on updating because I'm hooked on your stories! And you havnt updated in like forever ...

Ouch! A swordfish hacked into her, ouch! And I wonder who the 'he' Daniel was referring to is. Her ex, the past that she doesn't want to talk about?

Well it is a really good idea, and I like it a lot! but i understand all the other stuff that goes on in life! Can't wait to see more whenever that will be

So glad that I found this story and alerted it. I swear, you better not take anymore 5 month breaks. I think River is finally showing some deeper emotions, but I likeh is jerk attitude too.