Reviews for An Eternity With You |
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![]() ![]() ![]() my goodness this is good, each chapter you get better with the characters thoughts and just the whole plot of the story all together, I love it, more soon. Blue Eyes xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() You need to write, dammit! I like this so much, so you need to get that next chapter up, pronto! I'm sorry that is really bossy, but that's just how enthusiastic i am about your story! Please update soon, FM Radio |
![]() ![]() ![]() He isn't dead. lol. Nice chapter. I loved it and I can't wait for the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. Hopefully he's alright-t-t-t-t. I loves him :) lol. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, okay. So maybe I should base my first conclusion on this simple fact, Christian gave up on her almost straight away while Reese kept on trying to get her to breathe again... Also Reese said she was his. Hmm... Wah! Too tough. Oh... Crappola. Reese was Dracobitch's buddy. Sadly bad boys turned good boys who still have bad boys streaks are too alluring. And turned into a good boy by the dead Iris! How romantic, and cruel... Christian's gonna have to work hard to win me xD Now I'm wondering who and how Christian got turned into a vampy. I'm going to keep reading. Now I have to go study, ugh. Best Wishes from AG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ou. You know I have to say you've done a magnificent work with the characters. I really could not hate Demon, hard as I tried. Even Dracobitch (who already earned himself a nickname) has his own depth... I think. I have to see more of Chris and Reese, though. Not because they're not developed enough, but because, you know, I have to pick my favourite. Although I already have the first plot hypothesis. I really like the way you're showing the past story in Abby's dreams. I find it better than showing the whole past in a chunk as prologue. Me diggin'! Best Wishes from AG |
![]() ![]() ![]() HOLEE FAWKES! Okay, let me come to terms with this. Reese is a vampire. Reese is older than Christian. Reese came into Abby's life to protect her from Dracobitch. Reese is Christian's competition? That's yet to be seen. So Christian is actually a newbie vampy. Would you look at that? You had me fooled, I thought he was mightier. However, do not think I'm disappointed. On contrary, I quite enjoy the heroes quest in becoming stronger. And for the sake of the damsel in distress! Way too good. Imma keep reading. Best Wishes from AG |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I really like your story Keep writing - |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! Why can't I read more? Why do I have classes tomorrow? And why oh, why, did I fuck up my wrist and am typing three times slower? It makes it hard to remember what I wanna say! First thing first things. I remember reading the first chapter, yes. I reviewed it, too. I didn't keep reading for one reason and the other. So I got my ass on the chair and was like, "Imma read that story." And lo and behold! I started reading the second chapter and was pulled in to the point I didn't need to re-read the first to remember what it was about! Vampires (squee)! Have I ever told you I love your style? Never obcene, always heart pulling, yet proper. I'm once again cursing the uni that won't lemme keep reading tonight. So Reese, huh? He strikes me as the side-kick with a crush kind. Me thinks you like that sort of character (Rory). Christian is... got reminded of Katie McAlister's Christian, that poor fella... Christian is the hero with a short temper? From what I've seen so far. I like it; makes things less fairy tale-ish. I'm wondering, though, what that bite's supposed to do in reality (one thing I've learnt from reading vampy books is that bites aren't archetypical). I just browsed through some of your reviews, it seems like Reese is more popular than Christian. Makes me curious. I'm really intrigued! I'll be checking it out, take care! Best Wishes from AG PD: You're in my fave authors now. Honestly, you can't not be there since I really like the way you write and what you write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought it was sweet what happened between Christian and Abby. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good storie! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() woo! hey i totally love this! I really want reese and abby to get it on already - so much sexual tension! ghahahaha and i am really exciting for clubbing and dangerous vampires :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() NICE! Awesome story so far, Reese is totally droolable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hah, nice. That should be interesting. I loved the chapter, it was well written. Great job. Keep it up and update soon! Faith |