|Reviews for i was looking for support|
| shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
very well-worded dear. so much emotion although not too much as so to over-do it. very nice balance.
| creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
| LovetheMadness chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
| Faith Adeline chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
good. I like it. Especially the end line, I think it really just. . .packs a punch lol. Keep it up!
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
no longer am i draw to you...drawn
it’s not that your depressed that bothers me;.. you're depressed, but I think it's not your depression that bothers me or its not that your depression bothers me... using that twice seems awkward and I think depression works better than depressed
I really love the last line of the first stanza... putting un in parenthesis was an awesome choice... the science tension thing was really great as well
| Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Man! I love your work!
| iloveanimecartoons chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
GAWD, I felt this! You have no idea how profoudly intense these words are to me. They hit home and I just had to reread it like 3 times to truly let it sink in...
i write without a name, you've been following me, haven't you? LOL! I kid, I kid.
But, seriously, I only too well understand the emotion behind this poem, every subtle hint, every metephor, every line...