Reviews for drawing the line
shadow-of-a-trackless-sea chapter 1 . 4/24/2008
ha, love it hun. so freaking true. you can have crazy days and talk about facts that will never help anyone, but where is all that we should be learning?
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Haha, this made me laugh muchly.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
this piece is funny, but it makes such a terrific point.. awesome job
Autumn Lace chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
Cool. And Cute. I loved it.

-Flare
iloveanimecartoons chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
I just love your wit and sarcasm. This was an interesting piece that, honestly, I had to scan more than once (the beginning to the just before the last two lines) because I had a feeling there was a message. I finally grasped it. Your works seem to slip into a readers' subconscious and with the subtlety of a hurricane, drop a message that makes you go "Hm..."

Yet another fav! I love poetry that makes you think. This is one of them!
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
konban wa

:( Started out funny, but it ended with a statement so true and so depressing. "peace doesn't have a month." With all those odd months, why didn't ANYONE think to have a National Peace Month? (Or perhaps a national peace YEAR would be more helpful). Or at least Peace Awareness Month. sigh

Zaijen

-Shan-