NO

That can't be the end. It's to good. You can't end with my haid mistufing with questions like J K rouling did. Please writ more.

I loved this! It was very cute, and I really got a sense of the warmth of Travis' family. I thought maybe you could have added a little more to the dinner itself - a conversation or two. Does the loud/crazy uncle ask an embarrassing question? Little details like that would have pulled me in, made me feel like I was actually there instead of just looking in. Overall this was well written and I enjoyed reading it quite a bit :) I especially how you didn't make the ending a conventional meeting in the bakery and a cheesy kiss - the cake was perfect. Wonderful job!

Well, I really liked this story. It doesn't have one element that makes it stand out, everything just fit in perfectly. I really love Travis, character wise of course. He was very well developed. I wished they talked more though. I love the chemistry between them. When I read the ending it made me smile. I remain without the ability to stop smiling. It was a great read, believe me when I say that I'll try to read more of your stuff. You made my morning.

I absolutely, absolutely loved this. And I really want a Travis right now: he's like the perfect boy to ever exist. This was just such a cute story, one of those ones when you finished there's like a this goofy grin on your face: well, at least I have a goofy grin. Anyway, this was so cute and I enjoyed it! I almost wish it was longer haha.

Aw, that was an adorable ending! What a creative way to ask someone out. And you're right, everyone is entitled to at least one crazy uncle (I happen to have three, actually...and a normal one). This was a great short story! Well done!

update. Now!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

What a beautiful place to end. Ha. Update soon!

really good

Aww! Cute! And she didn't seem too surprised when he went nuts when the drum sticks :p

Little kids annoy me. I'm just awfully hopeful that if I have them I will be able to raise them to be kind and sweet existences. Not annoying. Cough.

Better update soon!

Or I'll threaten you again :)

And that's a threat.

Hey! Another great chapter. Travis is absolutely adorable. I particularly liked the comment he made about his cousin Connor being the one who was "about to hit his had on the ceiling fan." Priceless. Update soon!

WOO, giant holiday dinners! That's what my family does :D It's pretty much the coolest. Anywho, this is pretty cute :) And pretty original! I don't really know what to say to give it justice ( I never do sadly), but I just wanted to let you know that one more person is reading it and likes it a great deal . I kinda can't wait to see how this dinner goes, lol. On a somewhat unrelated note, I sort of picture Travis as like a younger version of Ned the Pie Maker. The tall lankiness, the adorable grin, the slouch, the...pie XD Alright, I'm done, I promise. See ya :)

God bless,

Chelsea .

soo cute

aw I like this. Very very cute. I can't wait for the last part. This could actually be a story! Keep it up!

Faith

that was a quick update. good job! lol dude, that's one huge family. looks fun. anyways try update soon!