Loved this and LOVE your writing style!

I liked that this was so short and sweet (like vanilla ice cream cake). It's nice to read about two people who realize and act on their feelings without any added drama. Sometimes a simple love story is all you need. :)

Suzanne

Love it! Read the rest later though.

I love it

Absolutely fantastic story. Glad I came across it.

Hi,
I know this story was published a long time ago, but I've read it so many times that it just seemed right to leave you a review (I just got a fp account, too). This is amazing, all of your short stories are amazing. Whenever I come back to this site after a long time, I check your profile to see what's new, and you never disappoint. But, this one is my favorite, the first story of yours that I read, and the one I reread the most. Thank you for posting, I'm sorry for taking so long to tell you how great this is.

Hey, this story has been re-reviewed for the A Drop of Romeo Humour archive, with the following review:
This is a cute little story, consisting of just three chapters. EruptingFender9’s writing is excellent, with strong dialogue, and is rich is witty humour.

The story starts with Riley, whose friend has just broken up with her boyfriend, buying her an ice-cream cake that says ‘Boys Suck’. Who should sell her this cake? A boy of course, a very likable, slightly dorky boy called Travis.

This is as sweet as an ice-cream cake with plenty of cute and awkward moments between the pair and the ending itself is just perfect, it really is, and it made me giggle incessantly for a while.

I love this story! One of my favorites! :D

Absolutely adorable, I loved the ending :D

this is really good! I like it... though all the guys I know are low life douche bags that need to goto hell... but thats just in my area. I do like the story though, keep it up!

I liked it. Though I wasn't sure were this was going so I didn't review, but nice job. I enjoyed it. It was a nice short story. :) I look forward to reading more of your stories later, but it is late...

AWWW! i loved that, the end was perfect!

God it was soooo cute! Loved it! :3

I must say I was biting my lip and all, because it was so cute, very good short story! :)

Woow I liked a lot, It was such a good story.

This is too cute. That is awesome how she got a cake saying "Boys Suck". She is a good good good friend. Eclairs also sound so good right now. Wow, Travis is really nice for inviting her for Thanksgiving. His family sounds like a real festive. It sounded like an awesome Thanksgiving dinner with everyone there, from good food to awesome people. The end was too cute with the cake. This three-shot is so awesome.