Reviews for Just Another Day
BrokenHeart4Eva chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
this is amazing, it almost made me cry both happy and sad tears at the same time
Yusuf chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
Wow, I really like how it transcends from one emotion to another. I could actually feel the emotions as I was reading it. I could feel the happiness half way through, and last few lines "I can finally say happily / It’s just another wonderful day without you" made me smile.

Really nice and heart warming poem.

Yusuf
Kissing Concrete chapter 1 . 2/17/2008
so sweet... :) gave me a happy feeling.
lymli chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
I read the poem twice to understand, it's sad, well, it's a story about a man who loses his wife but doesn't give up 'cause of their daugther?
nottoknow chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
awh how sweet!

i love it, its amazingXD well done
Lurid Black chapter 1 . 1/30/2008
Sweet, its good, but a little simple, though it shows vast emotion, which is only what a poet may possess, keep writing.

Lurid
heresyisforlosers chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
Good poem. Amazing how babies can change your perspective on everything. If you like movies, I recommend "Waitress".

s.t.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I love how it starts out like resentful and angry and by the end is total sincere... that's the effect children can have.. the descriptions of the girl are also really great

A few grammatical errors:

Taken care of her.. takin' but id stick with taking because the other lines are ings

Another day were I want to break down... where

PS If you're bored today check out the review game's review marathon.. there's a link in my profile
lookin4nemo chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
this is so sweet! I love it so much!