|Reviews for The Unselfish Alchemists|
| A Great White Light chapter 1 . 2/22/2008
Interesting, but is there any deeper meaning? I can see why you got a publishing deal. You're a really good writer.
| La chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Well that's upsetting. Dying for a single oil spill, when there will be many more? Not only that, but they die before we even get to know them!
By the way, I think it would be quite helpful if you created a list or a chart that showed all the characters and how they were related. There are so many; one can forget or become confused...
I'm not trying to attack your work by the way; I always love it. I would, however, like it if this piece was longer. It's such a serious subject, containing unknown characters, to be dealt with in so short a chapter.
| Casey Drake chapter 1 . 1/23/2008
...*closes eyes* Lovely.
Gosh I love these stories.