Reviews for Premonition
Seth Greenwood chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
Well written, for sure. A couple of things:

Why does the angel's duty to teach him explain why she was a cat?

I don't know about other people, but I for one don't know how to pronounce those strange letters; you might want to consider using regular ones to create the same sounds, if possible. It just makes it a little easier for the reader to understand. That being said, it does add a feeling of unfamiliarity that can help in signifying how the nouns behind those names don't belong to the world as we know it.

I like the story so far, keep posting chapters!

Seth