I miss this story so much... I wish I could give it a new read again someday...

i kinda liked peach. such a weird story, this.

First of: This story was amazing. It was unique and pleasing in many ways. I don't like happy endings, they're usually way too cliche. But I cannot shake off the feeling that there must be something more to Lucian... Nobody can go searching for people like he did if they thought of others as only 'possession' and nothing more... I feel like there is something else that desperately needed to be said!

The ending to this story literally made my week, you have no idea how long I've been waiting for a story in which the main character actually walks out on the person who abused, and manipulated them. Maybe this wasn't the reaction you were aiming for, but when he walked away from the guy who acted like him "owned" him I pratically cheered.

Thank you, I now have I Kissed a Boy stuck in my head...

Wow. This story was... beautiful. The ending was brilliant, perfect. I was half-afraid Lucien was going to completely break character and confess his undying love for Gary (because I've read too damn many fictionpress stories), but I love that you stayed true to him to the very end. I loved Gary's last monologue, too. After everything that had happened, after finally breaking Lucien, I loved that he didn't go on some huge rant or completely break down. Instead he said "This wouldn’t have happened…if you had listened, you know?" Perfect. You're an excellent writer and you created some gorgeous characters. Thank you for this story.

Well, I like the story :) But the ending was a little too depressing for my taste.

I think it is about -4 degrees celsius :)

I just finished reading this story and I feel like I should review, because I did read it all the way through, but I am not quite sure what to say. I liked the story, the characters and your writing style, but the ending was ... I don't know ... not what I was expecting. I honestly can't describe my feelings past that.

Hmm I liked this. Although I want to know what happened between this chapter and the last chapter XD how much time had passed? Things like that. Good job! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Faith

I really hope there will be a sequel. It is just too sad to leave them like this T_T

I just want to say:

I LOVE THIS STORY!

and also:

ArGH this is making me not study for my test! I'm going to FAIL! T_T But I can't stop reading X_X

Wow, that was a really intense ending, which is perfect for this wonderfully unique and creative story. The last line was very sudden and kind of ambiguous, which I usually don't like, but it seemed to work here. It leaves you with a sense that Gary will never be happy and has no hope-which is depressing, but the way you described his despair was absolutely beautiful. The best part of your writing is the emotions it evokes; you have an enormous talent for that. I was super impressed by this story. Good job!

Thanks for the update! That was a crazy ending that really needed to happen. I feel no sympathy for Lucian but I wonder what Gary will do now.

I'm not cheering you up.

Jerk.

If you want to be cheered up listen to The Offspring.

Growl