|Reviews for into your opal eyes I fell|
| Kaia Zeffirelli chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
This is absolutely amazing! Wow. I love how you use the senses alongside the verses. Great job; emotion is dripping from each and every word! My favorite of your work so far. )
| Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 2/3/2008
This has a marvelous audibility to it. Like spoken word, where the reader can sense the inflection of voice and tone, as the specific details intermingle into place. It shows a story. Which is much more difficult than merely telling a story. A true favorite, as it represents a natural quality, both in the setting and the way that it unfolds. Great write. MD:77.