Reviews for Slow Motion
a silenced revolution chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Really intense, great formatting. I like it. And formatting, well FP is terrible with it.
PocoSnow15 chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I really liked this. I frickin loved it. All of it. Even the lack of italics in the parantheses. )
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I like thisto. I can really tell how angry you are. I hope it gets better. Keep writing. I'm sure it helps. Best of luck!

Kristie Marie
The Reverse Edge Blade chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
This was better than your other stuff lately! You sure you want to give up poetry? Cause it doesn't seem like you've lost your touch.

I liked how you repeated certain words, how you parted the sentences. Also, how you put some words in parantheses is good too, making the poem more emotional. This was good! Keep at it!

The Reverse Edge Blade
LovetheMadness chapter 1 . 1/24/2008

the way it was written