Reviews for A Sense of Confusion
The Brilliance of the Mindless chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Wow. I really liked this. Excellent use of words, placement, and sentence structure. _

S. Ben Beach chapter 1 . 1/31/2008
good work! love the ending, initially I thought this could fall a bit flat (no offence; I've just read/written a bit too many love poems for one day) but by the end I was pleasantly surprised. Dialogues were neat, it's very honest, which is always a plus. Here's to whatever you've got next haha. Keep it up! :)