Reviews for summerohseven
vitriolicvermilion chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Short and sweet and sad.

I like the linebreaks

and the story even more.

all you need is oxygen chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
i really like this, though i'm not totally sure why.

i think it's how easily you convey the message, even though you don't use a thousand adjectives or [even words].

you write like some poets create poetry. i'm not sure what it is, but maybe it's the way you compare things, and the way you form sentences.

i fell in love with "i think the screen exploded, or at least my heart did."
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 2/13/2008
This is beautiful and very real. The style and the emotion fit together perfectly. I especially like the paragraph about going to the movie.
fairytale failure chapter 1 . 2/8/2008

This is fabulous. Probably because it came from the heart but, even so, it feelslike a story to me, with a beautiful bittersweet ending. I liked 'I told her I had plenty of sunshine' and the whole paragraph about the kiss. It's such a romantic idea.
hide your eyes chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
oh, break my heart, why don't you.

This is so beautiful and going on my favorites RIGHT NOW.

summer is such a killer.
Dorkie chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
this was great... it's very lyrical and beautiful.
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I LOVE THIS! Oh, wow. Im speechless. Plus Favs.
xfail chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
This is very true, you know? I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this, because it happens to so many people and the brief way you've described it seems to go with the short life of the relationship. Good work, once again!