Reviews for takes my pain away
creepy kiss on tuesday chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
That's really pretty. I like it because those are all the places I find beautiful.

I like the italisized words, too. Emphasis, emphasis.
ce n'est pas que je m'appelle chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
Ooh. Beautiful. You write things that make me WISH I had talent! Haha.
xfail chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
This is beautiful. Sometimes it seems like you've taken the line between poetry and prose and blurred it, as I've seen you do often in your 100 Words For 100 Days. This is very poetric, yet reading it feels almost like following a train of thought. Beautiful work!