Reviews for Waiting |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm waiting for a miracle too...nice job :) I like your username, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this poem because it had a simple elegance that seemed to personify your theme really well. I loved the verse"siphoned longings, that have waited eternities crowd in me." I think you should work with the beginning a bit though so it embodies more of the style you worked into your second verse. Great Job! |