Reviews for Waiting
Beauty From Pain chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I'm waiting for a miracle too...nice job :) I like your username, too.
ClaireMasonPenney chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
I really liked this poem because it had a simple elegance that seemed to personify your theme really well. I loved the verse"siphoned longings,

that have waited eternities

crowd in me." I think you should work with the beginning a bit though so it embodies more of the style you worked into your second verse. Great Job!