Reviews for Cut Me Out
yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
yeah, i'm socially awkward...anyway, i really like the rhythm of this and how it portrays the dynamics of making/maintaining a friendship...
CrayonMentality chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
"Maybe I should’ve asked

And I know, I know I should’ve listened

Instead I built this wall

But there is nothing missing (Is there nothing missing?)"

I really like the part for some reason, it just seems really in sync with the rest of the poem. ]

This poem is actually sad but I quite like it.