|Reviews for Cut Me Out|
| yodel a blue streak chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
yeah, i'm socially awkward...anyway, i really like the rhythm of this and how it portrays the dynamics of making/maintaining a friendship...
| CrayonMentality chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
"Maybe I should’ve asked
And I know, I know I should’ve listened
Instead I built this wall
But there is nothing missing (Is there nothing missing?)"
I really like the part for some reason, it just seems really in sync with the rest of the poem. ]
This poem is actually sad but I quite like it.