Reviews for She's An Angel |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like it...not exactly my style...and a little short for my taste...but there's nothing wrong with short...you've probably gotten this a bunch but watch your spelling...you've got some words that don't belong...like 'made' where it should be 'mad' ... just little mistakes that kinda trip up the flow a bit...either way it's a pretty good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww romantic :D I love this story, hope you know that! lol :D Looking forward to the next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! NO NO NO! Cliffhanger! Wow, you're evil! lol You better update soon, coz I'm dying to find out what happens now. hehe joking :D Looking forward to the next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() aagh! don't stop there! i'm DYING to find out what happens! write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm still loving this story! lol. Like the twist with Rachael as well. You've got me wanting more now. lol. Can't wait for the next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE Juno! that movie is freaking AWESOME! he got his bike custom made..? i wish i could get my bike custom made. coolness! can't wait for next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter. It made me laugh, the whole how she feels awkward about seeing him just in a towel, and he's totally cool about it. Lol. Brilliant! :D Looking forward to the next update :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg that must be so awkward... |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really cool! keep writing PWEEZE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww! I actually thought that kiss was real life, gutted when I read it was a dream... Only thing I would like to add is that the names Justin and Austin are so similar, that sometimes it's easy to get mixed up. Also perhaps little bit more surrounding discription, just so that it's easier to picture but apart from that it's great! Keep adding! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is AWESOME! i love it! this is so addicting...write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know how there are some stories where you can just tell what's going to happen at the end just by reading the summary? like, 'he likes her, and she likes him, but neither know it! what are they going to do?' and stuff. this story isn't like that! i'm REALLY eager to find out what happens! love it! keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! i love it when authors update regularly. then i don't have to wait...and wait...and wait...and wait.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that's ok. as long as you keep writing it's fine wif me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you HAVE to write more! i love this! |