Reviews for and i wanted more than this
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 2/4/2008
The imagery is beautiful... especially the contrast of how powerfully sad the images are in the beginning and how sweet at the end... the only thing is the second to last stanza.. the lines seemed to end in odd places and through of the flow to me

Still and amazingly powerful and well written piece
the face in the window chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
This is beautiful - as always. Great imagery & and all that.

Rowan.
xDancingintheRainx chapter 1 . 1/26/2008
Absolutely beautiful. The imagery is stunning and your word choice is flawless. You've done an amazing job with this piece. Excellent work.
Lily's Sushi chapter 1 . 1/25/2008
i love this.

i do.

the imagery is really great.

it describes a big part of my life

and i just wanted to tell you that i love it.