|Reviews for confessions taste like only more silence|
| glimpses from an ivory tower chapter 8 . 4/27/2008
The reference to Hawthorne did not go unnoticed :)
The use of "what" instead of "who" hit me the strongest in this piece, as the person sees you as a creature, instead of a human being. Oh, so many ignorant people, so few books to whack them with.
A little bit confused by the last stanza, I was unsure whether the "you" was referring to yourself, or the owner of the sickly grim smile.
| cupids.battlefield chapter 5 . 4/19/2008
My favourite chapter. "I wasn't left with anything beautiful" is a brilliant line.
| Viviaya chapter 8 . 3/31/2008
This part speaks strongly to me as well as one of the ones a bit earlier in this series.
| the face in the window chapter 14 . 3/24/2008
| emptyemptyemptyempty chapter 1 . 3/22/2008
Very nice use of spacing an dbolding.
pinpoint stars are pretty.
And yes we all know what happens then.
did you leave the 'i's un capitalized on purpopse or not?\
| simpleplan13 chapter 14 . 3/18/2008
I liked this... though the beginning confused me. What is the it in it is? Also I dont know what a car park is... but Im sure that's just a cultural thing
I like the last two lines. The second to last is a powerful and interesting description and I liked the formatting of the last line and the idea of trying to try
| i'd delete this if possible chapter 3 . 3/2/2008
"she never saw/the way i looked at her/(because you know she would have cringed)" I love that. It breaks my heart, but I relate completely.
| paradigm se7en chapter 13 . 2/25/2008
- this is beautiful. I actually just read through the entire series now.
even as is, the writing's mesmerising; the emphasis you give with the formatting makes it visceral and that much more atmospheric.
| simpleplan13 chapter 13 . 2/21/2008
I like this a lot... the first two lines especially
| Eminie chapter 1 . 2/20/2008
Very short and powerful piece of poetry. I love the imagery you created here.
| the face in the window chapter 13 . 2/19/2008
Awesome so far - amazing imagery. Honestly, I am very envious - /very/.
| Shasta Valentine chapter 1 . 2/12/2008
But i felt a little lost.
| Laura Elizabeth chapter 1 . 2/11/2008
You have an amazing talent for putting thoughts into poem form. Again, wonderful )
| Faith Adeline chapter 12 . 2/7/2008
i love this series. wonderful job.
| dress her up in fairytales chapter 4 . 2/5/2008
powerful opening line.