Reviews for Yellow Monster
f c mclean chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
hah i love this new one i opened it up and was looking for the brother line and no where to be found it is wicked good i lvoe the revisions however i miss u we need to do something this week tho idk we will be spontaneous!
l337 r0cX3r chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
I actually like the term "yellow monster." It has a vagueness to it, that actually makes the whole thing more creepy in the end. So some I can understand how they might find it kinda lame, but from my point of view, it fits perfectly.
drafts of ka chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Captain, how have I not heard this story? Scary, but makes a good poem. Even though it's frantic, it rhymes, which is cool.